desert carried home
in our pockets filled with war
the home needs dusting
Haiku 119/365:2013
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4 responses to “Haiku 119/365:2013”
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I love this! It’s so simple and yet it says so much. I feel like this is the type of poem that can stick with you for a long time and only years later can you grasp it’s full meaning. Good work!
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now this is a compliment that crawls into your backpack and takes a journey with you…one that will bring a smile on the dimmest day…thank you!
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Nice one! Sempre. -Benny
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thank you oh prolific one
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